I need some advice, from teachers and reg people?

From a teacher - excellent poem! Can you talk to the teacher you want to show this to? Do you trust him/her? Some teachers will respect your privacy and not share your work with the cl unless you want them to. This poem is yours and it's your choice to share it or not. If you decide not to share the poem, please keep it; you may want to share it at a later date. Good luck and jkeep writing!